Voiceover/Script

We thought that a voiceover throughout the whole scene would make it more effective after we decided to take out the flashback scene...

The purpose of the voice over is to make it different to other ideas that people have. My partner and i thought it would be more effective.

Black screen shows for a split second as the sound is peaceful and the sound of birds chirping.

Bobby: Fresh home.

*as he stands outside the prison gates on his release*

*sigh of relief as Bobby leaves prison*

Bobby: Feels good to see daylight as a free man. 

*looking to the sky, as if he is thanking God. A suttle grin apprears on his troubled face*

*reality hits, and his facial expression changes to that of a more serious one. His grin disappears. Kicks the stones on the ground and begins walking*

Bobby: Although, being in a box gave me time to reflect.  I found Allah.  I’m trying to live a good life, Inshallah. My past still haunts me everynight. Voices in my head screaming…”MURDERER, MURDERER!” Self defence can create demons.

*walks down the deserted street with one hand in his pocket, the other clinging on to the only belingongs he owns, the white jail bag.*

Bobby: Despite how much I try to convince myself it was an accident, my soul still remains in torment.  Flashbacks. Pain. Of which I caused.  A Mother still mourns her only son, a daughter still longs for her father…

*exchanges a glance with a passer by.  A boy the age of the boy he killed.  Guilt over takes him once again, as passer by looks at him suspiciously. He brushes past him unintentionally and walks into the train station*

*TRAIN APPROACHES PLATFORM AND BOBBY STEPS ON*

*sits alone on the empty train as he looks out the window, his thoughts over take him.*

Bobby: I can’t begin to imagine how my Mum feels. *QUICK JUMP CUT TO A DISTORTED IMAGE OF HIS MUM* My brother. My sister. My daughter.  The daughter I never got to see grow.  She must be beautiful now.  

*gets off the train and begins his long walk back to his flat*

Bobby: I deserve to be dead. In my head I’m dead already.

Bobby: I’m not safe anymore. 

*eerie music creeps in, as he walkes to his door.  Puts his bag on the floor. Hears noises upstairs, looks and walks up the stairs*

*SOUND OF HEART BEATING*

*opens the door*

*reaction shot of Bobby, he is startled to see this person in  his room, it is the victims brother*

Victims brother: Long time no see, whats good brother ? 

*CLOSE UP OF BOBBY'S FACE*

*Music Plays*

THE END.  Cliffhanger...